Prototype one meeting progression

In response to the comments my client gave me i have decided to improve the homepage which was my prototype one. 

In my prototype meeting minutes I suggested the improvement to 'Rewrite the text on the homepage including more what the system is in a succinct fashion'. I have since improved the text and have included more information on what the system's function is whilst keeping it succinct.  Below is a screenshot showing this improvement. This will be positioned at the bottom of the page and will inform the user about what the system will provide them.